Saturday, May 23, 2015

3 o'clock in the Afternoon

So Daily and Stuart had a great date today when they decided to write a little short story together. They had some story cubes laying around and decided to roll the dice and write a story from there. We hope you like it!

3 o'clock in the Afternoon

Ellie looked at her phone and realized that her alarm was going off.  She did not know why she had set an alarm to go off at 3 o’clock in the afternoon, but she was determined to go and find out.
            Heading out her back door, she turned the lock and started towards her car. She realized, however, that her keys were still sitting on her dining room table. Luckily, her neighbor had a spare set. Maddie was a young girl, about Ellie’s age, and while they weren’t necessarily “friends” by the normal definition, she was the closest Ellie had come to making friends in the few short months that Ellie had been living in Seattle.
            Ellie entered through the back gate of the small condo, hopping over the large irrigation ditch that separated the two apartment sidewalks.  It wasn’t a big deal to do it; she had seen the neighborhood boys do it plenty of times.  There was a slight problem, she just happened to enter the wrong gate and was completely unaware of where she was.  She heard a yelp of a large dog, who she had surprised.  Ellie’s heart sank, what would the dog do?  Would it run up and bite her?  Or would it maybe just growl at her menacingly?  These thoughts raced through her head when she realized that the dog was looking at her quizzically, and not in a threatening way.  She said, “good boy,” to not make it decide to change it’s mind.  Just them she saw the dog’s owner walk up to their sliding door.
            “Hey, what are you doing?!” yelled the owner. He looked as if he had just gotten out of bed and was a little disgruntled at having been woken up by a girl in his back yard.
            “I was just wondering why my alarm was going off,” came Ellie’s reply. Sometimes honesty is the best policy and other times it makes you seem delirious. This was definitely the latter situation.
            The man cracked a smile. “You’re trying to figure out why you alarm is going off, so you decided to sneak into my back yard and make friends with my dog?” Ellie felt her cheeks get red. It did sound a little ridiculous, but it was the truth.
            “Could I just use your phone? I need to see if my friend can get my spare set of keys to me.” The man turned abruptly and walked back into the house. Ellie took this as an invitation to follow him. As she entered the house, she was intrigued with the wide array of guns and workout equipment that was scattered throughout.
            As the man grabbed his phone, he said, “Don’t look so freaked out. I’m in the Army. I just got back from training yesterday.” He stopped and smiled, “I bet you couldn’t do five pull-ups on the bar over there.”
            Ellie laughed, “You’re probably right. I think I didn’t do much of that in high school. I was more into basketball”
            “Well here you go, try not to get distracted about catching butterflies or something like that princess.” He said amusingly.
            “What did you just call me?” Ellie snapped.  She dropped the phone and marched straight up to him without putting it back on the receiver.  “I’ll have you know that while I don’t have much in upper body strength, I am an excellent runner and I can run five times further than anything you have ever done in the Army!”
            Besides, I could just have Gregory come and compete against you. It had been a few days since her and her friend Gregory had talked. He was living in New York now, working as a business executive. He probably didn’t have time for his old high school pal anymore.
            “Ellie, is that you?” Suddenly, back to reality, Ellie remembered that she had dialed Maddie’s number.
            “Oh, hi Maddie. Yes, it’s me. I was just wondering if you had my spare key?” Ellie twirled the phone cord on her finger, twisting it every which way.
            “ I do,” replied Maddie, “I’ll bring it over to you in just a minute.”
            “Thanks so much. See you soon.” Ellie set down the receiver, strangely aware that the Army man was sitting at the kitchen table listening intently to the conversation.
            “Thank you for letting me use your phone.” Ellie said, gathering her purse.
            “Not a problem. Next time, though, you can come through the front door like everyone else.” The man chuckled, bringing a small wrinkle to the space around the corner of his lips.
            The man held the back door for Ellie, “Hey,” he said nervously, “I’m new to the area and some people from my work are going to go up the canyon and build a fire tonight. I don’t mean to seem weird, but I noticed that you seem to be new to the area too. Would you like to come along? They are really nice people.”
            Inside, Ellie laughed. She really was a large crowd kind of person. But, this young man seemed kind and didn’t make her nervous like most people.
            “If I can figure out why my alarm is going off, I’d love to come.” The man smiled.
            “Well, if you’d like some help with that I’m terribly bored and really don’t want to finish unpacking.”
            “Fine with me,” Ellie said, so they both went out the door into the sunlight.  Ellie decided that the first thing to do was to go home and wait for Maddie to get there with her keys.  They got there soon enough, but the door was locked and Maddie had the keys. Ellie was getting really frustrated; Maddie said that she would be there in a few minutes.
            “What now?” the Army man said. “Is there a spare key somewhere that we can use?  Oh yeah, your friend.  Should we just go by her place?”
            This was a good idea, Maddie was one of those people who forgot what day of the week it was.  So she probably forgot to bring her keys already.  “Yeah let’s go to her place, she’s obviously there since she picked up her phone.” It took a minute for them to walk there, and during that time Ellie found out that the Army man’s name was not Army man, but Jeff.  Jeff had lived out in Virginia for most of his life and had moved here to start a new life being independent.
            So they arrived at Maddie’s house and rang the doorbell.  No one answered.  She rang again, and still nothing.  She knocked again a third time and still nothing.  Finally she knocked on the door and immediately realized that the door was ajar.  “I think someone’s in there, you go in first.”
            Jeff pumped his chest and flexed his muscles and dove inside without another word.  The lights suddenly turned on as if a match was struck.  There was a loud “SURPRISE!!!” and then silence, and then a loud scream.
            Ellie timidly poked her head into the house, and then quickly burst in at the sight of her parents, siblings, co-workers, and, of course, Maddie.
            Oblivious now to the strange stares still coming from the majority of those present, Ellie wrapped her arms around her mother who inquired as to who the “strange young man with the gorilla-like grunt” was.
            “Oh,” said Ellie, returning to the situation-at-hand, “this is Jeff. He was helping me figure out why my alarm was going off. It turns out I was supposed to meet Maddie for lunch. Apparently, she had other ideas.” Turning quickly to face Maddie, Ellie inquired, “How did you know today was my birthday? I haven’t told a soul- well, except for my family.”
            “Well, your mother got ahold of your phone one day and looked through the people you have called and I was at the top of the list for the past few months since you lived here.  And we got things planning from there.” She looked up to Jeff.  “I guess we all know why you’re late now,” she snickered.

            Just you wait!”  Ellie yelled.  “I’ll get you back for this someday!”

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